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I wish I was an illustrator!! I could see all the pictures in my head as you read this awesome poem, Michael! You are immensely talented!! Loved this!!!

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Playwrights are not always the best oral readers of their own works. As native speaker of Aus.t English I had some difficulty at understanding your delivery of your fine work, you elide/run words into each other at times.

No, I have no hearing aid and yes, you may like to consult somebody (if un-jabbed) in Radio or other field in which success stands or falls with clear enunciation.

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And of course, YOU would know all about playwrights wouldn't you ?...... ha ha

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What a judgemental, rude comment

& inaccurate imo too

You puddle

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Lol

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Beautifully & uniquely delivered message Michael 🩵

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Enid Blyton would be proud of you = Mrs Puddle Duck

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You naughty boy...!!! Go stand with your face to the purple wall at the back of the class of correct colours! ;)

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FUK ... You are very clever Michael <3 .. so can we expect a book of poetry specifically orientated for children, or even a , with this ONE poem ..illustrated ..of course !!!

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Yes!!

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