Simple enough to easily follow, complex enough to make you keep track. Loved it all, will never be able to look down another mine shaft without wondering now! I've always liked ravens, now I'm not so sure....... Thank you, most enjoyable.
Definitely Sonya, then Steve not Jarrod. Love the weave of greed that corrupts throughout, esp. in the previous two brothers. History always repeats it seems.
Sigh...now I can rest. The Raven as trickster? Murderous nature? They were punished by being limited to the mine perhaps. Yet another very evil being they could inhabit. No doubt enhancing Sonya's evil potency. I only feel sorry for the dog. The only one with integrity! I am confused about the detective aspect of the story. Were they real?
Wow, what a tangled web you weave.
Simple enough to easily follow, complex enough to make you keep track. Loved it all, will never be able to look down another mine shaft without wondering now! I've always liked ravens, now I'm not so sure....... Thank you, most enjoyable.
Wow, thank you so much. So, who most evil? After the ravens
Definitely Sonya, then Steve not Jarrod. Love the weave of greed that corrupts throughout, esp. in the previous two brothers. History always repeats it seems.
Sigh...now I can rest. The Raven as trickster? Murderous nature? They were punished by being limited to the mine perhaps. Yet another very evil being they could inhabit. No doubt enhancing Sonya's evil potency. I only feel sorry for the dog. The only one with integrity! I am confused about the detective aspect of the story. Were they real?
No Adele, a device to enter the characters heads with, and a bit of fun.
Anyhow, never written anything like this before. Thank you for reading it
ohhhhhh cleverness. Cool